Suffocation - First Draft & Production Log 8

This is the draft version of our opening sequence we put this together as we wanted to see how our ideas worked together and how they looked on camera and edited in sequence. Rianne and i were given some feedback back from our audience who watched this and evaluated it to see if it met the conventions of a British Social Realism film. We benefited from creating a draft as we are now able to create a opening sequence with a review from our target audience, also we are able re film are tailor the opening sequence to the audience preferences  However there is a piece of clip missing before the opening title that we were not able to film for the due day of the draft because of our actors not being available at certain times however we plan to include the missing part in the final of our opening sequence. The sound will also be cut out and our sound track will be played over the opening sequence. 

This is our draft for our opening sequence, what we did this week was we were editing the draft together. When filming and editing our draft it was mainly to plan out the camera movement and what actions wheer going to take place, many takes were taken to get what we wanted. Although this is rough we aimed to film it as close to what we wanted as possible so when we film the real thing we can use it as a guide.  After creating our draft we showed it to the rest of our class to get feedback on how to improve our sequence. The feedback was very useful because the feedback we got was very specific and good and detailed feedback is very easy to think about and take on board. Bearing in mind in our opening sequence the characters are not in the correct costume and our shots are not in correct lighting. Also there is no sound placed over it and a section where the car is driving off is not been edited in.